[ShowJumper23]

these are 2 poems my best friend wrote. they are Fantastic IMO

Laughter
By Jessica Zachar

Walking through life, somebody falls
So you laugh at them in spite
Others join in, now you’ve the force
The control, the power, the might

You rule them all now; you are the “chooser”
You pick the cool ones, and why
You crush the others and call them losers
And laugh at them when they cry

Some of them start to help each other
They see through the evil you’re crafting
They actually start to like one another
Until you are the only one laughing


The Look
By Jessica Zachar


change your name, buy new clothes
perfect makeup, plastic nose
now your one of Them, you’re hot
They say you’re happy, but you’re not

friends are gone, replaced by boys
party’s on, go with the noise
sitting in a cornered chair
perfect poise and perfect hair
They say your hip, They say you’re cool
but you’re nothing but a fool

an empty shell, nothing there
surface deep, inside bare
there’s something wrong, They find a glitch
They leave you bloodied in a ditch
you’re back into reality
now you tell us, you have seen
the other side, the “perfect” place
cruel rulers of the human race
who holds these idols up so high?
us, my friend, yes, you and I

[Emzalss@2580]

Those are really good! I've been wanting to write a poem about individuality and groups, etc for some time.

[shmed_me]

Hey i made this thing up :
Friends are forever guys are whatever when worst come to worst my horses coms first !

[shmed_me]

hey i heard this one somewhere ( cant remember ) and thought i sounded really good :

A thousand horse and none to ride! -
With flowing tail, and flying mane,
Wide nostrils never stretched by pain,
Mouths bloodless to the bit or rein,
And feet that iron never shod,
And flanks unscarred by spur or rod,
A thousand horse, the wild, the free,
Like waves that follow o'er the sea,
Came thickly thundering on,...

[HorseBliss]

Originally Posted by shmed_me

Hey i made this thing up :
Friends are forever guys are whatever when worst come to worst my horses coms first !

i like that!!! hehe and its soooo true haha

[EmazingCasper]

Originally Posted by shmed_me

Hey i made this thing up :
Friends are forever guys are whatever when worst come to worst my horses coms first !

I love that too!!!