[horsebabe69987]

Mockery

You laugh,

You mock me,

You make fun of me behind my back.

You may think it makes you cool,

But it only shows how weak you are.

So keep on talking,

It won’t make me or break me

You try so hard to make me cry,

Am I all you think about?

You think you are cool because you try to make people cry,

It’s not fair,

And it’s not nice.

Sticks and Stones may break my bones,

But words shall never hurt me.

You make backfired compliments,

To make me self conscious.

But I know you are unsecure of yourself.

You may be told you are pretty or beautiful,

But you really strive off others pain and misery,

That you bring to them

I will not shed a tear because of you.

I have stayed strong all throughout the year

You have never brought me down,

Or upset me.

I have showed you kindness and generiousty

Only for you to make fun of my new haircut

I will stay strong for more years to come.

You can not upset me with your own self pity.

So what do u guys think?

[merlin]

wow I like it.
very umm whats the word??
oh i dont know but i do really like it
is that based towards a friend?

[horsebabe69987]

Thanks
It's actully based on a lot of experinces i have had with frineds

[exxy]

Very nice, I always wished I had the ability to write nicely but I just don't hehe

[westerngirl14]

VERY good! Your da man! ( sorry, I'm just going off the movie "she's the man" ........ LOL)

I love the thought you've put into it. It really portrays a vivid picture. Congrats!

[horsebabe69987]

thanks a lot
what would u think about it as a song??
1 of my frineds has an amazing singing voice and plays guitar too, she saw it recently and wondered if she could sing it for her monthly music thing

[thekycowgirl]

Very good!!!!

[westerngirl14]

the song thing would work, I think, if you could figure out music for it. Can your friend do that?
I've got a friend that has an awesome singing voice too. =) I'm soooo jealous! she's got this husky, sexy voice, and mine is just soprano. =( but we aren't ALL gifted with good singing voices!

[horsebabe69987]

hahaha
yea im terrible at singing too, i tried to sing it to a song that i know it would go well with but i made it to where i couldnt hear the words, i recorded it and it was terrible, i had my frined sing it and it sounded awsome!